steven.hutchinson
12-Apr-13
I think the current version is a good demo and, with a couple of changes, could be a great demo. Specifically, you should remove the mouse clicks the viewer can hear in the background and remove the sound distortion from the microphone if you can. If you want something really fancy, you might consider adding a short clip from a classical artist like Hydan, Mozart- or something much newer such as a short clip from the instrumental version of the song "High Roller" by the band Crystal Method, etc.). Overall, the current version is concise and conveys the usefulness of the product. The video clips fit well with the script, and the viewer is left with a desire to learn more about the product.